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ds_recsredux2006-10-10 06:05 pm
strangecobwebs.livejournal.com) wrote in ds_recsredux2006-10-10 06:05 pm
Touch
Title: Touch
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brooklinegirl
Pairing: RayK/RayK's right hand
Rating: NC-17
Length: *giggles* Oh, it's big... [I'm 12! I can't help it! The fic is medium-length, though.]
Why I'm reccing this fic: Because I kind of have a thing for masturbation. Uh. In fic! I kind of have a thing for masturbation IN FIC. Right.
Fraser was a guy like any other guy. Maybe he handled things just the same as Ray did. Huh. There was a thought.
There was a thought that made his last few minutes at work real uncomfortable. There was a thought that made him shrug into his coat and make sure to button all the buttons before turning to offer Fraser a ride home.
Because yeah. That was a thought that was going to have him rearranging his schedule for the evening, putting the jerking off way before the pizza and beer plan.
Touch
(Also, on an unrelated note, I completely fail at New Writers challenges. I was going to rec stuff byjustbreathe80, so go read everything she's ever written! Right now! Especially Back up slowly inside. Oh, and She comes here a lot.
And to the mods: I'm entirely too pretty to be yelled at for the past-challenge recs. Okay? *hugsnkisses you both to distract you*)
Author:
brooklinegirlPairing: RayK/RayK's right hand
Rating: NC-17
Length: *giggles* Oh, it's big... [I'm 12! I can't help it! The fic is medium-length, though.]
Why I'm reccing this fic: Because I kind of have a thing for masturbation. Uh. In fic! I kind of have a thing for masturbation IN FIC. Right.
Fraser was a guy like any other guy. Maybe he handled things just the same as Ray did. Huh. There was a thought.
There was a thought that made his last few minutes at work real uncomfortable. There was a thought that made him shrug into his coat and make sure to button all the buttons before turning to offer Fraser a ride home.
Because yeah. That was a thought that was going to have him rearranging his schedule for the evening, putting the jerking off way before the pizza and beer plan.
Touch
(Also, on an unrelated note, I completely fail at New Writers challenges. I was going to rec stuff by
justbreathe80, so go read everything she's ever written! Right now! Especially Back up slowly inside. Oh, and She comes here a lot.And to the mods: I'm entirely too pretty to be yelled at for the past-challenge recs. Okay? *hugsnkisses you both to distract you*)
Here will do for feedback, right?
I love what you've done with "There was a thought":
There was a thought.
There was a thought that made his last few minutes at work real uncomfortable. There was a thought that made him shrug into his coat and make sure to button all the buttons before turning to offer Fraser a ride home.
Because yeah. That was a thought that was going to have him rearranging his schedule for the evening, putting the jerking off way before the pizza and beer plan.
and the little touch of formality in "he allowed as to" contrasting with the rest of Ray's thoughts:
He allowed as to how he was maybe a little different than Fraser.
Ray's visions of Fraser making himself wait while going about his normal business and doing his filing are great!
History of Canadian Dirt?? *g*
Re: Here will do for feedback, right?